<div dir="auto">I just read it again and it reads very well, and has lots of improvements.<div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">I have a couple of notes about things that maybe need mentioning but they can wait until have thought about them more.</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">Justin</div><div dir="auto"><br></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">On Tue, 1 May 2018, 11:51 Trevor Perrin, <<a href="mailto:trevp@trevp.net">trevp@trevp.net</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div><br></div><div>Hi all,</div><div><br></div><div>I'm still planning to publish revision 34 to the website next week, so would appreciate final review and comments:</div><br><div><a href="https://github.com/noiseprotocol/noise_spec/tree/rev34" rel="noreferrer noreferrer" style="color:rgb(17,85,204);font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px;font-style:normal;font-variant-ligatures:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:400;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)" target="_blank">https://github.com/noiseprotocol/noise_spec/tree/<span class="m_-5677008003371161gmail-il">rev34</span></a><br style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px;font-style:normal;font-variant-ligatures:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:400;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255);text-decoration-style:initial;text-decoration-color:initial"><a href="https://github.com/noiseprotocol/noise_spec/blob/rev34/output/noise.pdf" rel="noreferrer noreferrer" style="color:rgb(17,85,204);font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px;font-style:normal;font-variant-ligatures:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:400;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255)" target="_blank">https://github.com/noiseprotocol/noise_spec/blob/<span class="m_-5677008003371161gmail-il">rev34</span>/output/noise.pdf</a><br style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:12.8px;font-style:normal;font-variant-ligatures:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:400;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;background-color:rgb(255,255,255);text-decoration-style:initial;text-decoration-color:initial"><br></div><div>After that I think we should do a revision 35 just for internal re-org (move more things into appendices, maybe integrate PSK better into the text), as discussed with Nadim.</div><div><br></div><div>Trevor</div><div><br></div><div><br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Fri, Apr 20, 2018 at 7:04 AM, Trevor Perrin <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:trevp@trevp.net" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">trevp@trevp.net</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><span>On Fri, Apr 20, 2018 at 4:09 AM, Trevor Perrin <<a href="mailto:trevp@trevp.net" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">trevp@trevp.net</a>> wrote:<br>
>  (5) It becomes confusing with Bob-initiated pattern notation, since<br>
> we'd have to decide - and people would have to remember - whether "s"<br>
> vs "rs" stands for Alice vs Bob or Initiator vs Responder, and whether<br>
> to reorder the parenthesized arguments or not.  Probably the best<br>
> choice would be to not modify the parenthesized text, i.e. here are<br>
> Alice and Bob-initiated notations for XK:<br>
><br>
> XK(s, rs):<br>
>   <- s<br>
>   ...<br>
>   -> e, es<br>
>   <- e, ee<br>
>   -> s, se<br>
><br>
> XK(s, rs):<br>
>   -> s<br>
>   ...<br>
>   <- e, es<br>
>   -> e, ee<br>
>   <- s, se<br>
<br>
</span>I reversed the arrows but forgot to reverse the DHs for the<br>
Bob-initiated pattern:<br>
<span><br>
XK(s, rs):<br>
  -> s<br>
  ...<br>
</span>  <- e, se<br>
  -> e, ee<br>
  <- s, es<br>
<span class="m_-5677008003371161HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><br>
Trevor<br>
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